Thursday, February 21, 2013

Haiku: Rouge Flower

rouge flower
runs from the altar
shedding tears

Runaway Bride


Carpe Diem Special #23, Rouge Flower


Our Chiyo-Ni haiku for this Special is:

koborete wa tada no mizunari beni no tsuyu

the dew of the rouge flower
when it is spilled
is simply water


10 comments:

  1. What is this altar of sadness?

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    1. perhaps for her, I was thinking more along the lines of runaway bride, got the idea from a tv show I watch

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  2. I too used the rouge flower as a metaphor for woman.

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  3. Beautiful use of the prompt !!!

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  4. Anonymous2/22/2013

    unique take.. dewdrops as tears, quite sad and lovely ^^

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  5. I liked the metaphor, well penned.

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  6. I love this imagery! Beautiful!

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  7. Sad.. But poignant,

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  8. Very well written...thank you for sharing.
    Peace
    Siggi

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