Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Haiku: Dark Night




full moon rises
o'er hazy metropolis
no heroes in sight




light the signal
calling the dark night forth
the city needs her hero

Carpe Diem #155,  Oborozuki (hazy moon)

9 comments:

  1. Awesome Jenn, what a wonderfully composed set of haiku, so different with all the other entries. Thank you for sharing.

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  2. Are the superheroes on their way?

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  3. the dark night/knight...I love it

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  4. Holy batman
    cruising in his batmobile
    villains shudder.

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  5. Love the metropolis/superman overtone ♥

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  6. Anonymous3/27/2013

    how lovely, superhero haiku!

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  7. who doesn't need a hero? if you meet Prince Charming, by any chance, give him my address!

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  8. Wow! Brilliant! A different and great take on the prompt :-)

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