Saturday, March 30, 2013

Haiku: WIllow

tease alligators
willow weeps o bayou
tickling waters

Carpe Diem #158, Yanagi (Willow)

6 comments:

  1. Not sure I want to tickle the waters with those gators ;-O

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  2. Tickling waters can be dangerous with alligators hidden in them !!!

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  3. Anonymous3/31/2013

    love the line 'tickling waters' ~ great message about 'willow' behavior ~ Happy Day ^_^

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  4. There's something both playful and ominous about your words...

    No Willow for Shade

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  5. This is a delightful poem!

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  6. by the bayou
    Tickling alligators
    lost fingers

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