Friday, March 15, 2013

Magic Arrival


Magic
Fills the night air
As the fae court dances
In celebration of Springtime's
Arrival









Form For All ~ The Cinquain

12 comments:

  1. ooo i wanna see the dance....and the spring...smiles....cool cinquain...

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  2. Beautiful! A mystical hopefullness rings in this one!

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  3. Oh If it could be like that :-)

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  4. Very nice. Ha, I wish we would have some of this magic in my part of the world! (Smiles)

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  5. Anonymous3/15/2013

    This is a lovely poem. You've broken the American cinquain form just a wee bit - an extra syllable in the last line - but the point of a prompt is to get you writing, not to provide a strait-jacket.

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  6. I am listening to robins as I write this so not far off for spring...nice ;)

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  7. oh nice...a bit of magic in this...i dance along...smiles

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  8. A warm welcome to spring !!!

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  9. The fae court of spring! nice.

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  10. I enjoy this cinquain very much because I'm enchanted with the fantasy faerie realm and the possibility of magic in all things. Very nice!

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